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There's a shining hero
and a damsel in distressed.
But what if the hero
is always depressed?
If the man is weaker than her
then what rules are we breaking?

Every night she saves him
Over the telephone.
And every night she tells him
that he won't ever be alone.
Sometimes he's so hopeless
that he'll leave her for something more
most of time it ends up being a whore.

When the damsel in distress
is stronger than the rest
sometimes it's stunning.
But Andie, the rules were never our thing
©2008-2009 ~highanddriving
:iconhighanddriving:

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andie
not really a love poem.

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:iconrobotcadaver:
this kind of works but it seems like you're using and abusing some sort of rhyme scheme and it's throwing me off.
:iconhighanddriving:
if it makes you uncomfortable then my job is done
:iconrobotcadaver:
seriously though, did you purposely write it with that bad rhyming?
:iconhighanddriving:
duhh
breaking the rules fgt

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